I like the part when Mary said:"Shine n Fine, Design to make your wedding perfect", i think that slogan is really COOLLLLL and i also like your sound effects, it helps me imagine the situation without being there. But the part when Zac convinced the peope to buy their rings, i think Zac said a little bit small and the music is a little bit loud so it kind of hard to hear.
I think this is a very well-done commercial because it states clear thing that you want to deliver to the audience, the sound effect sounds quite good with the commercial becaue it somehow brings un image to the audience. The music is match with the situation. But, I think there are still some improvments that you can make like you should fix your tone to fit with the situation or image that you want to deliver.
You have a great commercial and you have a great slogan.
Editing Effects: I like the effects u put in the commercial, it was really cool and it separated the scenes of the commercial. The effects helped a lot for people to understand this commercial Delivery: You did a great job in delivering the products to the audiences, I got what you guys were selling right on the first time I heard it. Music: Although you just used a little bit music in the commercial, but it brought a good effects to the commercial. We understand more about the situation.
- In this commercial, there were two voices that weren't clear enough, if you could fix that, the efficiency of the commercial would be higher.
I really like your commercial, because you have a great slogan and other stuffs, such as:
You have great sound effects, which helped me imagine where the story takes place without seeing the actual image. I also like your background music, it helps me by transfer the feelings of the speakers in the commercial to the audience. On the other side, I think you should make some of the speaker's voice louder to make the commercial smoother, like at a part, Zac's voice is like dinosaur, the next part, I could barely hear him, so if you fix that problem, I think your commercial would be perfect.
I like your commercial product and the way you say about your product. And, I really love your slogan. It is wonderful.
Also, I like your sound effects and how you use your music. I think it is very good choice that you choose this kind of music because, it explain me what is going on in the story and it is very good music to your commercial.
I would like you to improve in speaking more clear voice.
HEY! ^^ I really like your commercial because is very persuasive. It also had a great slogan!
I think your editing effects is excellent, it suits the commercial and had a good transition when someone speaks. The effects help me tell what are you doing or talking about. My favorite part was when you arrive to Shine & Fine, there is effects of rings and things related to it.
You did a good job on delivering the product to your target audience. Your script is good, it delivers the message to the audience directly. I really like how when the girl was ask to marry, she said stop and introducted about the product.
The music is very good and suitable for the commercial.You choose a good type of music that fits the commercial. Good job on choosing the music!
In general, the commercial is very influential and perfect. You can improve by having the same volume for every line. Because at the end, the volume is pretty small and hard to hear. Beside that I think you did a good job on the commercial. ^^
oh my...so many comments...ANYWAYY!!!! Your commercial is very effective because the sound effects and background helps it add to the mood you want to send the audience. Also, it doesn't feel like it was just there, but complimented the situation well. Also the editing was carried out really well. The voice was clear, and great transition. Since the editing and sound effects were chosen so well, the message was delivered really well. It also describes the product, and makes people want to buy it, the script was also very well writen. Overall, I think it was really great, but you can make the tone a bit more realistic. For example, a guy purposing to a girl wouldn't have such a bored voice. BUTTTT!!!!!!! It was really good and i loved it...:D
First, your commercial is very effective, I think it can convince a lot a people to buy your product. For the editing, your commercial has a lot of effect and it's very creative. There are great transitions. Your commercial delivers a great message to the audience, persuade people to buy you product. The voice was clear, and the plot is very creative. Your use of music is very good, it makes people understand more about the commercial. ...but there are some part that is hard to hear and the tone of voice is kinda boring. I think you can improve that.
i like your project because it really makes the reader have a good attitude towards your products. It is short but it really makes sense. The best thing I think that is good about this commercial is that the part when Danny doesn't know what to say, then a bell came and went on with the commercial. I really think that this product will turn out really well. The thing that they need to fix is that the beginning of the part, the verbals can be easier to hear, because I don't hear part of the beginning parts. But overall I think that this is really well. I really like it.
I like the part when Mary said:"Shine n Fine, Design to make your wedding perfect", i think that slogan is really COOLLLLL and i also like your sound effects, it helps me imagine the situation without being there. But the part when Zac convinced the peope to buy their rings, i think Zac said a little bit small and the music is a little bit loud so it kind of hard to hear.
ReplyDeleteI think this is a very well-done commercial because it states clear thing that you want to deliver to the audience, the sound effect sounds quite good with the commercial becaue it somehow brings un image to the audience. The music is match with the situation. But, I think there are still some improvments that you can make like you should fix your tone to fit with the situation or image that you want to deliver.
ReplyDeleteYou have a great commercial and you have a great slogan.
ReplyDeleteEditing Effects: I like the effects u put in the commercial, it was really cool and it separated the scenes of the commercial. The effects helped a lot for people to understand this commercial
Delivery: You did a great job in delivering the products to the audiences, I got what you guys were selling right on the first time I heard it.
Music: Although you just used a little bit music in the commercial, but it brought a good effects to the commercial. We understand more about the situation.
- In this commercial, there were two voices that weren't clear enough, if you could fix that, the efficiency of the commercial would be higher.
I really like your commercial, because you have a great slogan and other stuffs, such as:
ReplyDeleteYou have great sound effects, which helped me imagine where the story takes place without seeing the actual image.
I also like your background music, it helps me by transfer the feelings of the speakers in the commercial to the audience.
On the other side, I think you should make some of the speaker's voice louder to make the commercial smoother, like at a part, Zac's voice is like dinosaur, the next part, I could barely hear him, so if you fix that problem, I think your commercial would be perfect.
I like your commercial product and the way you say about your product. And, I really love your slogan. It is wonderful.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I like your sound effects and how you use your music. I think it is very good choice that you choose this kind of music because, it explain me what is going on in the story and it is very good music to your commercial.
I would like you to improve in speaking more clear voice.
HEY! ^^
ReplyDeleteI really like your commercial because is very persuasive. It also had a great slogan!
I think your editing effects is excellent, it suits the commercial and had a good transition when someone speaks. The effects help me tell what are you doing or talking about. My favorite part was when you arrive to Shine & Fine, there is effects of rings and things related to it.
You did a good job on delivering the product to your target audience. Your script is good, it delivers the message to the audience directly. I really like how when the girl was ask to marry, she said stop and introducted about the product.
The music is very good and suitable for the commercial.You choose a good type of music that fits the commercial. Good job on choosing the music!
In general, the commercial is very influential and perfect. You can improve by having the same volume for every line. Because at the end, the volume is pretty small and hard to hear. Beside that I think you did a good job on the commercial. ^^
oh my...so many comments...ANYWAYY!!!!
ReplyDeleteYour commercial is very effective because the sound effects and background helps it add to the mood you want to send the audience. Also, it doesn't feel like it was just there, but complimented the situation well.
Also the editing was carried out really well. The voice was clear, and great transition. Since the editing and sound effects were chosen so well, the message was delivered really well. It also describes the product, and makes people want to buy it, the script was also very well writen. Overall, I think it was really great, but you can make the tone a bit more realistic. For example, a guy purposing to a girl wouldn't have such a bored voice. BUTTTT!!!!!!! It was really good and i loved it...:D
First, your commercial is very effective, I think it can convince a lot a people to buy your product.
ReplyDeleteFor the editing, your commercial has a lot of effect and it's very creative. There are great transitions. Your commercial delivers a great message to the audience, persuade people to buy you product. The voice was clear, and the plot is very creative. Your use of music is very good, it makes people understand more about the commercial.
...but there are some part that is hard to hear and the tone of voice is kinda boring. I think you can improve that.
i like your project because it really makes the reader have a good attitude towards your products. It is short but it really makes sense. The best thing I think that is good about this commercial is that the part when Danny doesn't know what to say, then a bell came and went on with the commercial. I really think that this product will turn out really well. The thing that they need to fix is that the beginning of the part, the verbals can be easier to hear, because I don't hear part of the beginning parts. But overall I think that this is really well. I really like it.
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